thrillingdetectivetales: Davie and Alan from the play, Kidnapped, kissing on the moors. Both men's faces are obscured. Davie has a hand on Alan's cheek. (Brando + doggo)
Tec ([personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales) wrote in [community profile] heavyartillery 2019-11-21 01:24 am (UTC)

Re: How do you pin down your POV?

Trial and error is basically what I'm foreseeing, lol. ;P

Alternating POVs is definitely another option, as you and [personal profile] arwen88 have said. I always get weird with alternating POVs, though. Like I get super caught up in whether it's balanced between the two perspectives, so idk. Plus it's harder for me to maintain a consistent character voice when jumping back and forth like that, but who knows! Maybe I'll try it and that will totally solve the problem, lol.

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