Because apparently I can't just write like a normal person, I'm doing one of the looselipssinkships memorial prompts as an alternating POV, non-linear thing, so there's sections from Andy's PoV in Melbourne and sections from Eddie's on Guadalcanal when they met. Which I have massively under researched. And am feeling very unsure about. But I think the fic potentially is a lot stronger with them. But I'm trying to keep them short so no one noticed that I've done zero Guadalcanal research and don't care.

Anyway, more of a whine than a request for advice.