thrillingdetectivetales: Davie and Alan from the play, Kidnapped, kissing on the moors. Both men's faces are obscured. Davie has a hand on Alan's cheek. (HA - Mod TP 1)
Tec ([personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales) wrote in [community profile] heavyartillery2020-05-06 11:01 am
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WIP Wednesday [2020-05-06]





WIP Wednesday!



Load 'em up, kids! Show me whatcha got this week!
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[personal profile] arwen88 2020-05-06 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw thank you! <3

I think I want the kitty to be a way for them to get in touch with themselves and start healing a little after everything? Take Ray at the end, when he looks so unhinged: I think it would have been good for him to have a kitty to care for. But I don't really know how to explain the process of healing.
Edited 2020-05-06 18:51 (UTC)
thrillingdetectivetales: Davie and Alan from the play, Kidnapped, kissing on the moors. Both men's faces are obscured. Davie has a hand on Alan's cheek. (Default)

[personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales 2020-05-06 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, that’s the thing about plot. You don’t have to explain it outright. You can show Ray having a hard time taking care of himself, and instead taking care of the kitty and slowly starting to also take care of himself because the kitty needs him and there you go.

ETA: Whoops! Just saw you edited your comment lol. I was replying to the original version but I think it still works.
Edited 2020-05-06 19:31 (UTC)
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