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Tec ([personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales) wrote in [community profile] heavyartillery2019-11-20 09:18 am
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[WIP Wednesday] 2019-11-20

Well, would you look at that? It's time for another
WIP WEDNESDAY!



Let's see those sexy snippets and that fabulous fanart, everyone! Ask your questions, get some feedback, flail at each other about ideas, whatever!
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Re: How do you pin down your POV?

[personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales 2019-11-21 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
Trial and error is basically what I'm foreseeing, lol. ;P

Alternating POVs is definitely another option, as you and [personal profile] arwen88 have said. I always get weird with alternating POVs, though. Like I get super caught up in whether it's balanced between the two perspectives, so idk. Plus it's harder for me to maintain a consistent character voice when jumping back and forth like that, but who knows! Maybe I'll try it and that will totally solve the problem, lol.
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