[WIP Wednesday] 2019-11-20

20/11/2019 09:18
thrillingdetectivetales: An American Army medic in WWII crouches over a wounded soldier while something explodes behind them, with "MOD" in white letters above them. (HA - mod Bob 1)
[personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales posting in [community profile] heavyartillery
Well, would you look at that? It's time for another
WIP WEDNESDAY!



Let's see those sexy snippets and that fabulous fanart, everyone! Ask your questions, get some feedback, flail at each other about ideas, whatever!
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Date: 20/11/2019 21:29 (UTC)
muccamukk: BA leans on a table, with a sketch of an engine in the background. (A-Team: Engineer)
From: [personal profile] muccamukk
I think usually I fade to black after the first couple rounds. It's enough to get the idea "And they banged a lot!" after. I think ending with the impression that this carries on for some time and skipping to the morning after is fine.

Date: 21/11/2019 01:27 (UTC)
thrillingdetectivetales: Davie and Alan from the play, Kidnapped, kissing on the moors. Both men's faces are obscured. Davie has a hand on Alan's cheek. (Harry in greasepaint)
From: [personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales
I second this. Sex pollen is hard because it could just be a 15K fuckfest but I think having just enough porn to convey "no really, they got it on A LOT" and then moving on to the next thing is the way to go in that sort of story.
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