WIP Thursday [2020-04-02]

02/04/2020 10:53
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Since I totally forgot about WIP Wednesday—because what even is linear time at this point, am I right?—it's time for
WIP Thursday!



Bring us your snippets, bring us your dialogue, bring us your awkwardly worded and your perfect imagery!
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Re: Andy/Eddie Amnesia

Date: 02/04/2020 16:29 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales
Oooohhh my heart! This one is going to hurt so good, I can already feel it.

I like the idea of peppering pieces of different letters through for additional context. I think it'll add a really fun layer of depth to the narrative.

Re: Andy/Eddie Amnesia

Date: 02/04/2020 16:33 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] muccamukk
Yeah, I had been thinking of including bits of letters as scene breaks, both Eddie's letters to Andy, and Andy's letters home including mentions of Eddie, since he starts to get context from that.

But that'd mean rethinking the structure of the story.

Re: Andy/Eddie Amnesia

Date: 02/04/2020 16:43 (UTC)
thrillingdetectivetales: Davie and Alan from the play, Kidnapped, kissing on the moors. Both men's faces are obscured. Davie has a hand on Alan's cheek. (Default)
From: [personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales
Depends how much retroactive work you want to do, I s'pose, but I think that sounds really nice.

Re: Andy/Eddie Amnesia

Date: 02/04/2020 17:04 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] muccamukk
I was hoping to get this done quickly, is the problem, but it's turning into one of those Fast or Well situations that had the Melbourne fic in process for months.

I'll have to think about what to include.

Re: Andy/Eddie Amnesia

Date: 02/04/2020 17:06 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thrillingdetectivetales
Ah, yeah, the whole "rock and hard place" of the fandom world, lol. Godspeed however you decide to go. I'm sure it'll be excellent either way!
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