[WIP Wednesday] 2019-11-20

[thrillingdetectivetales]

Well, would you look at that? It's time for another
WIP WEDNESDAY!



Let's see those sexy snippets and that fabulous fanart, everyone! Ask your questions, get some feedback, flail at each other about ideas, whatever!

Comments

[muccamukk]

Enough porn that you feel the story you're telling is complete?

[arwen88]

It's a sex pollen, so uhm. I'm not really sure if I should just go with them doing a round and leaving the readers to surmise it mostly goes on like that or if I should take it up until the moment they finally get sane again.

[muccamukk]

I think usually I fade to black after the first couple rounds. It's enough to get the idea "And they banged a lot!" after. I think ending with the impression that this carries on for some time and skipping to the morning after is fine.

[thrillingdetectivetales]

I second this. Sex pollen is hard because it could just be a 15K fuckfest but I think having just enough porn to convey "no really, they got it on A LOT" and then moving on to the next thing is the way to go in that sort of story.